what i hear that needs to be fixed are some syllables on the vocal parts are out of tune ... and of course the mix of the different instruments and verses/choruses is shakey
lyrics
if its only makin' love
then i'm sold
if its only careful
me you won't know
i don't like raisins
you like oranges
set the table and I've been able
to raise a kid
if its only makin' love
then i'm sold
if its only careful
me you won't know
pack up this garden now
the angels sing
take up this burden now
for i have sinned
pack up this garden now
the angels sing
take up this burden now
for i have sinned
if its only makin' love
then i'm sold
if its only careful
me you won't know
i hold back pleasin'
you my solomon
40 days and 40 nights
if you make it right
he'll let you in
pack up this garden now
the angels sing
take up this burden now
for i have sinned
credits
released March 4, 2009
vocals, piano, guitar - sarah fridrich
garageband home demo
